There are tons (well not literally, videos don't have weight...) of special effects that I stuffed into the video. transitions, music, text, backgrounds, sound effects, and a few others. I believe this makes the video look more professional, and really express what I'm trying to say. The transitions also help make it not look... well... jagged like a broken rock. And I really like the text options. They're really cool. And I also (lastly) think that the beginning kinda redish-orangeish-yellowish bubble-like things, along with the blurred text and ocean background sounds, makes it really a feely sorta thing. I think the effects were really fun to play with.
In mostly all of these paragraphs I've talked about how good the poem is, but there are a few things that could be improved on. First of all, the timing is a little off. This is because the transitions were taking up a little of the video, and I didn't have enough video to go around. Second of all, the "In the morning" in the beginning of the video was slightly cut off. But that's all I can think of for now. Overall, I would say I'm pretty satisfied with the result. Critique the video for yourself. I don't know how, but there's gotta be someway to message me of YOUR critique of the video. Figure it out. Also, below, there is the plan that my poem was based off of. Read it if you like. I don't care.
See ya next time!
-Linden
I like how it's short and sweet
ReplyDeleteSome shots are a bit shaky
Great voice and shots
•I liked the writing
ReplyDelete•The ending kinda got cut off
•The b-roll of the time lapse was amazing
I like how you used "in the morning" multiple times
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of shaking in the camera... use the Stabilization
I love all the special effects, for example when the video turned into a picture, amazing special effects
good B-roll like the dog time lapse
ReplyDeleteto much noise in the background like the sound effects at the end
good creative shots such as the chickens and dogs
1. Nice poem, its very fluent
ReplyDelete2. Some videos have loud music
3. Like the transition/music
I really like your sound effects, it helps me visualize the story more in-depth!
ReplyDeleteThe camera movements were okay for this project, but some of it was distracting.
I love the sunrise time-lapse, it really worked well with what you were saying and plus, it was just really pretty.
I like the effects
ReplyDeleteOne shot is shaky
I like the verity of shots
I really liked the natural sounds that you added in the Visual Poem
ReplyDeleteIt was pretty loud when the door closed and it took away that last part of the voice over
The time lapse at the beach was beautifully done, great job!
Nice transitions
ReplyDeletetoo much sound in the back-ground
I like the creative shots you took like with the dog
It was really well written
ReplyDeleteThere could be more descriptive word in your visual poem
And I really like your B-roll on how you got nice pics of the beach
I liked your topic
ReplyDeleteYour camara moved and wobbled a lot
I liked how you found noices for a lot of the things you talked about
Good job on the transitions from one picture to the other
ReplyDeleteYou should work on having balanced videos
Great pictures of animals and morning sunrises
I like how you showed a picture of the morning sun by the beach, Good job waking up early.
ReplyDeleteI didn't really like how at the end you were shutting the door, It was really loud.
I liked your shots of nature.
I like your transitions
ReplyDeleteYou could make your poem more longer
I like how you got your clip from the dog to the dog running
Amazing B-roll of the birds
ReplyDeleteIn the first shot there was a little movement
Nice perspective of the dog running
I like how your poem was written, it all fit together.
ReplyDeleteSome of the camera movement made me dizzy.
I like how you put the camera on the dog, it was cool.
I <3 the effects sooo much! Its bloody brilliant! The camera snap is just, Pure genius
ReplyDeleteThe footage was quite shaky throughout the film
Fantastic voice over and fantastic-er writing!
Powerful and passionate poem!
ReplyDeleteThe background noise in the last shot was too loud; we couldn't here that last word!
You really did great with the effects; you are a natural!
Wow Linden I loved this Visual Poem! In my opinion I really liked the time lapse and when you recited the poem you would see the specific b-roll of what you were reciting too.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing you could do better is turn the volume down on the ending shot because I couldn't hear the last few words that you said.
I liked how much emotion and feeling you put in when you recited the poem,